Here is a link to the latest draft with all the changes i have made; including changing the Buffalo to an Ox. I have also removed a few bits from each scene because we timed the reading of each line and it was initially too long, so I had to shorten some of it.
https://docs.google.com/open?id=0B4-31MYKnD3PMDYwM2NiNGMtMWEwOC00ZTc3LTliYWQtYTQxNGJhNWY5OTJi
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